I like the exposure and the color but am bothered by two things: My
brain is left trying to figure out the missing half of the plaque at
bottom and my eyes dislike the out of focus elements at top right.
Backing up a bit and cropping square might solve both "problems".
Otherwise a smaller aperture is in order.
But in the interest of full disclosure I should say that I appear to be
bothered by out of focus foreground elements more than most people. But
in my own defense I should say that this photo reminds me very much of a
painting. But a painter would never render these foreground elements
out of focus.
Chuck Norcutt
On 3/11/2012 5:51 AM, Gerry Walden wrote:
> This was taken last year on my little Olympus E-PL2 with the 14-42
> lens fitted, and I have just gotten around to processing it and used
> LR4 for the task. I am quite pleased with the results. Amongst other
> tools I used the selective sharpening brush down the right hand edge
> to 'tighten up' the soft are.
>
> http://bit.ly/ykb4gl
>
> Thanks for looking!
>
> Gerry
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