>
> I think it needs more depth of field. Fully half or more of the
> blossoms are out of focus. But maybe it could get by with even less
> depth of field instead by blurring those out of focus parts even more.
> My problem with the image is that the out of focus bits are not enough
> out of focus to keep my eyes from trying to focus them. There is also a
> vertical light streak at far left. I would agree with removing the
> blossom at far right but would prefer that it be more fully included if
> you should reshoot it. There is plenty of space in the frame. Cropping
> or removal decisions can be made later.
>
I agree with Chuck on this, and furthermore the photo should encompass
the entire group of flowers at the end of the branch and be centred. A
portrait format closeup of a single raceme, such as the one to the lower
right, would do very well if you can adjust the DOF to fade out the
background.
Chris
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