Thank you Dawid - this is what I call positive criticism and I think you
are right.
I sense I'll learn a lot from the list.
:-)
Bien cordialement de Metz
Philippe
Dawid Loubser wrote:
>I like colours on the angel, and thew selective focus. What I
>absolutely dislike is the
>part of the car in the lower left corner - perhaps composing the shot
>differently to keep
>the car either outside of the field of view, or fully inside, would
>have been better?
>
>I also don't like the areas of the background which are entirely blown
>out to white, it's
>a bit distracting for me in this shot - softer transitions would have
>focused attention on
>the angel a bit more I think.
>
>So - I really liked Angel 01 a lot more, on all fronts - composition,
>tones, and light.
>
>
>On 13 Nov 2009, at 9:14 AM, Philippe Amard wrote:
>
>
>
>>A second is up, unless flown away.
>>http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Phileica/Angels/
>>(can be wiewed larger - gear in exif)
>>
>>C&C welcome as usual
>>Bien cordialement de Metz
>>Philippe
>>
>>
>
>
>
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