I like colours on the angel, and thew selective focus. What I
absolutely dislike is the
part of the car in the lower left corner - perhaps composing the shot
differently to keep
the car either outside of the field of view, or fully inside, would
have been better?
I also don't like the areas of the background which are entirely blown
out to white, it's
a bit distracting for me in this shot - softer transitions would have
focused attention on
the angel a bit more I think.
So - I really liked Angel 01 a lot more, on all fronts - composition,
tones, and light.
On 13 Nov 2009, at 9:14 AM, Philippe Amard wrote:
> A second is up, unless flown away.
> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Phileica/Angels/
> (can be wiewed larger - gear in exif)
>
> C&C welcome as usual
> Bien cordialement de Metz
> Philippe
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