I would go with Bill's statement of making it short and to the point. There
are two things I like to see: 1) Something which is a bit of "reporting" of
the facts. 2) Something that lets me know who is this person. So totally off
the cuff when I need to be doing something else, for me an abbreviated
version might look like this . . .
Mr. Smith, a classically trained piccoloist, has had a lifelong interest in
photography. He works in a variety of formats with both film and digital
capture. In addition to his position with the Bodacious Philharmonic
Orchestra,
he serves as an adjunct professor of photography at Lower Mississippi
Institute of Technology. In this body of work, he examines the relationship
of
the tides to the Universe . . .
Bill Barber
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