That's it. I might have cropped closer to the handrail, but I like things
coming close to the edge of the frame and not everyone agrees with me. It
looks good. Now the girders have less "weight" and frame the image on the
left, keeping the eye in.
BTW, just read the account of the Iceland trip on your website. Great photos
and narrative. I'd love to go there but I'd have to sell both my kidneys.
Andrew
on 2004/05/03 6:36 PM, Roger Wesson at roger@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:
>
> OK, I revisited 'Kiasma' and decided that I agreed with the idea of a
> bit of a crop off the left. Maybe less of a change than what you were
> suggesting - I've just taken off the distracting white bit that was
> visible to the left of the girders:
>
> http://www.world-traveller.org/photo/gallery/displayimage.php?album=44&pos=4
>
> What d'you reckon?
>
> Roger
>
> Andrew Gullen wrote:
>
>> Nice work. I especially liked "Gorgona". The angle on "Tuomiokirkko" was
>> imaginative. For my taste "Kiasma" could do without the girders on the left
>> as they detract from the twisted "X" shape of the stair. Good shot
>> otherwise. Shifting the perspective might alter the stair too much, so
>> perhaps just a left crop to reduce visual weight, or perhaps a combination?
>> (all opinions IMHO as always)
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