All of your changes are improvements. I'll keep those lessons in mind.
Glad I could offer some images to entertain you!
Jim Nichols
Tullahoma, TN USA
On 4/8/2017 6:26 PM, Moose wrote:
On 4/6/2017 2:45 PM, Jim Nichols wrote:
This afternoon, my grandson installed a dental implant to replace a
tooth I cracked last Fall. While waiting for my appointment, I
snapped a young lady making a medical sales call on a rainy day.
http://www.gallery.leica-users.org/v/OldNick/20170406-IMG_0807.JPG.html
I've been enjoying your posted images. It's a joy to see your progress
as a photographer, and many are just enjoyable to see, no matter who
might have made them.
Many are naturally composed by the subjects. Some others are obviously
carefully cropped. A few strike me as able to be improved by cropping.
This one seems to me to have a lot of extraneous stuff in it. With a
bit of perspective correction and cropping to 4x5 format, I think it's
much stronger.
<http://www.moosemystic.net/Gallery/Others/Nichols/Attention.htm>
I liked your close, B&W crop of hair braiding. I also think there's
another good crop of the whole thing.
<http://www.moosemystic.net/Gallery/Others/Nichols/Girls_Being_Girls.htm>
OK, I messed with some other stuff, too. ;-)
And I like this cat better cropped to 3:2.
<http://www.moosemystic.net/Gallery/Others/Nichols/Saturday_Cat.htm>
Composed Moose
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