On 11/30/2013 10:02 PM, Peter Klein wrote:
> This one shows more interaction between the two women.
> <http://www.flickr.com/photos/24844563@N04/11142992953/>
Ah! The first one was fine, but this is much stronger. Lovely catch of the
current way of sharing.
> M8, 35/1.4 ASPH
Oh the seductiveness of speed. You've nailed the focal plane, between the
women, to keep both relatively in focus. It's
nice for the front one's skin, but leaves nowhere for the eye to rest
comfortably on something in focus but the bracelet.
I'd gently sharpen the eyes, brows and mouths, and maybe tone down and/or
slightly blur the bracelet.
Sharp Eyed Moose
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