You could leave the car there but make it more about the bridge by
taking the shot from the other side of the bridge.
Chuck Norcutt
On 9/26/2010 9:37 AM, Chris Barker wrote:
> Thanks, Chuck. They're all good points, and they probably arise
> because I was trying to crop out distracting signs and wires.
>
> I'll have another go, as it's not meant to be about my car; that's
> there to give it balance ;-)
>
> Chris
>
> On 26 Sep 2010, at 13:24, Chuck Norcutt wrote:
>
>> like the ford and packhorse bridge (not something you'd likely see
>> in the US) and I also like your car... and the color is quite good.
>> But I do have to question your composition. As it's framed, the
>> photo is more about the car than the ford and bridge. But, since
>> the left side of the road at the ford is cut off, the top of the
>> bridge is clipped and the front of the car is also cut off, it's
>> not truly effective for either.
>>
>> If you had widened the view a bit to take in a bit more road on
>> the left, more above the bridge and more car on the right you'd
>> have a good advert shot for BMW! :-)
>
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