Thank you - just uploaded a crop version as suggested.
http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Phileica/Angels/
thanks again
Philippe
Dawid Loubser wrote:
>Hi Phillipe,
>
>The first one (angel in front of doorway) doens't strike me as
>anything special, more like a snapshot to document the object.
>
>The second one I do like quite a bit more, with the selective focus. I
>always like to apply the mantra of always asking myself "what can I
>remove from this shot?" - i.e. every distinct element in my images
>must be there because I like it to be there, otherwise it must be
>removed, either via shallow DOF (my favourite technique for going
>this) or via composition, the technically better technique for doing
>this. In your shot, the semi-blurred, very bright building on the left
>scream out to me, and draws attention away from the main subject. I
>would tone it down or remove it by some means:
>
>- Selective darkening
>- Cropping it away completely
>- Making the DOF even shallower, though with a four-thirds body and
>this angle of view, that may have not been possible
>
>As ever, my personal aesthetic opinion, nothing more.
>
>Dawid
>
>
>On 16 Nov 2009, at 11:30 AM, Philippe Amard wrote:
>
>
>
>>Two shots of number 3 are up.
>>The second of which can be seen large.
>>http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Phileica/Angels/
>>
>>Thank you all for the feedback on number 2,
>>please feel free to C&C, as usual.
>>
>>Bien cordialement de Metz
>>Philippe
>>.
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