#25 is excellent. #24 needed a strong fill flash. It has too much dark
shadow which is probably exaccerbated by the light wall behind. I would
try brightening the shadow area.
Chuck Norcutt
Manuel Viet wrote:
> It's been a long time since I haven't proposed some pictures to this list
> sharp eye and sharper tongue, so here are 3 samples of my vacations attempts.
>
> The first, I put it because I truly like it :
> http://perso.orange.fr/m-viet/23-gwenig.jpg
> too bad, it came out of a *gasp* canon ql17 (40mm, 1.7) ; apx 100, rodinal.
>
> The others are from an OM-1md, 135/3.5 (silver nose, of course), apx 100,
> rodinal :
> http://perso.orange.fr/m-viet/24-enora.jpg
> http://perso.orange.fr/m-viet/25-m2.jpg
>
> I don't do much portraits, so I was pleased to see those two coming out the
> way I intended them to be (mostly).
>
> Everything was processed in my epson filmscan 200 on a Mac, Photoshop 5.5.
>
> I'm looking forward for your welcome critics and suggestions.
>
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