Thank you very much for your comments (Wayne and Jeff) I am asking you for
all this becasue I am fed up with my life working as a Pharmacist and I want
to create a new business with another guy who is photographer. We will start
with weddings and I want to be up to the standard. I simply love photography
and it really drives me crazy. So, than you very much for your point of and
ideas.
Regards,
Dave
----- Original Message -----
From: "Jeff Keller" <jeff-keller@xxxxxxx>
To: <olympus@xxxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Monday, October 10, 2005 5:34 PM
Subject: [OM] Re: Montage with four pictures taken with DZ50 F2
> Nice picture David, but I liked the first one more. I noticed her upper
> left arm and left thigh have some steps in the tone. It is likely just my
> LCD screen but since you manipulated the image of her arm I thought I
> would bring it up. Also, it hardly seems like her arm would need to be
> made thinnner.
>
> The beach behind her looks very nice. It looks like you might have focused
> slightly in front of her. The rocks on her left are very sharp while those
> on her right are out of focus. I would have liked to see the rocks to her
> right in sharper focus. I'm not sure I would have liked the picture with
> the near rocks out of focus though.
>
> Her right thigh appears to have a double image but it is probably due to a
> shadow. This is the only thing that I found distracting. If I were
> manipulating the image, this is probably what I would have tried to "fix".
> In general though I like pictures which have "defects". In general if you
> ask for comments I think you will get many more ideas for change than you
> would really want to do. I find the comments very helpful though.
>
> I would agree with Wayne's comment that her right arm looks odd.
>
> -jeff
> -------------- Original message from "David Irisarri"
> <div2000@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>: --------------
>
>
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> I would like to show you this picture taken with DZ50 F2. I have changed
>> many things in the photograph and I would like to hear your comments
>> about
>> them.
>> http://www.myfourthirds.com/document.php?id=15669
>>
>> Cheers,
>>
>> Dave
>>
>>
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