Acer,
Good series of shots generally, although I'm going to be a bit picky about a
few !
Arches - I like this one a lot, the recession of the arches L to R, then R
to L.
Pathway - Once again the recession of the arches, and the dark ceiling hold
my attention.
Reception - OK, but I like to see verticals as vertical, unless it's really
exaggerated.
Alcove - Great, makes me feel like I want to go and sit there.
Cozy corner - Nice, but I'd like to see the verticals either parallel or
more converging, looks a bit like it's not quite right.
Stairs - I like it.
Sitting room - Good, but I would like to see all the chair legs, may have
been better shot vertically.
Ages - I like the line of the banister. I would burn in the right hand side
of the photograph (VDUs & window area) to guide the viewer towards the
centre rather than the right.
> Fire at will! Anything you can tell me to make my work better
> will be much
> appreciated. Any messups are mine, not the lenses :) (except
> color print
> blame goes to Fuji)
>
Wayne Harridge
Ivanhoe, Victoria, Australia
http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Louvre/6152/
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